In this version, she meets him in Valasno, after the Council.
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Blood flowed from the gash on her arm as she left the practicing courtyard. When she turned the corner, she nearly ran into a broad young man.
"Whoah! Uh, sorry 'bout that," a deep voice with a strange accent accompanied his large build.
"It's fine," she started to go on her way. When he saw her wound, he stopped her.
"Oh, you're not going anywhere, Sweetheart. Not with a cut like that." She turned to face him.
"I'll be fine." Once again she turned to go.
"You need a doctor. Here." He caught up with her, tucked his golden hair behind his ears, and began to look at her arm.
"Fine. I need a doctor." He continued to examine her arm. She looked at him quizzically.
"Oh, right." He pulled aside the flap of his jacket to reveal the green patch of a doctor embroidered on the pocket.
She pulled her arm away. "I'm fine."
"No, you're not. You have a six inch gash on your forearm near a main vein and you've lost significant blood for a cut that size. Are you feeling light headed?"
"No."
"Dizzy?"
"No."
He paused. "Are you in any sort of pain at all?"
"No, I'm not. I told you, I'm fine." He stared at her. That's when she remembered that it wasn't quite normal to feel no pain. As usual, her skin pulled itself together, like water stills after a splash. The young surgeon touched her now perfect skin in awe. She pulled down her sleeve over the bare spot, embarrassed. She quickly bid him farewell and went on her way.
He was left standing immobile. Skin that healed itself? This was a marvel unheard of.
12 comments:
ih my goodness! skin that heals itself!!! eurika!!! lol... i like the doctor dude..
it's Jayor. you hate him, remember?
oh yh.... whoops.... darg u jayor... yh i don't like him... sry.... i just like his reaction to the skin thing... agh i think i'll stop now.
what do you have against him, anyway? he's amazing!
yh sure.
amazing to you. not to me. darg jayor.
that doesn't answer the question...
bad [past feelings between the two of us....
seriously... even Tony likes him.
so what? tony-me. TOTALLY diff. people. totally. he's yh. Tony. and i'm me. so yh... jayor... just bugs me... idk y
no, I mean, Tony has good judgment. he thinks Jayor is so cool because of his sacrificial love for Spenfalla.
agh susu....don't say that.....plz...... i do like jayor's sacrificial love... and his personality....I- i guess.... maybe jayor is cool. idk. just in the begining when they met, I didn't like how he was like, falling all over her... and i guess that just stuck with me. idk.... sry. tony's judgment is very good... it's incredible. so yh, sry. jayor rox. he really does. i just yh. nevermind.
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